Our group pitched to Mr Lawes and Miss O'Dell, here's the feedback we received;
What went well/Strengths - The idea of our film was well thought out, and would fit to the genre.
The opening sequence was interesting and appealing towards the possible target audience and would be a good piece to do for our coursework. We were told that we researched efficiently and the idea of the monologue, consideration of the 4 key areas, and the separate choices we made about our piece. They also said that the idea of keeping our main character as a mystery throughout the whole second minute of the piece.
What would make it better/Weaknesses - To make our idea better, we should ensure that the Monologue is clarified and polished in order to make sure that the audience is aware of what is happening in the story, and which will not be cringy, cliche or ineffective. They also said that we should consider filming the second part as the style of CCTV so his identity is still kept safe.
Opportunities - The opportunities of our opening sequence, are that our idea could become a strong and appealing opening sequence, as long as the monologue we make is good.
What we should do next/Threats - Next we are going to find out if we will be able to film in central London because of certain laws, also, we are going to find out the availability of a black cab for the final scene. Lastly we need to consider what actor we are going to use as we may need someone that is older than us because he is showing how he got rich and this is not likely to happen to a younger person.
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